Friday, December 11, 2015

Connections

While I was reading Jon, I kept on feeling something was familiar... what do you call that, rendez-vous or something? Anyways, during our class discussion, we discussed how the story reminded us of other short stories/books, like the Junie B. Jones collection, I think someone said "A Series of Unfortunate Events", but for me this book reminded me of the book "Flowers for Algernon" (I book talked this last year and I bet I've talked about it in a previous blog post).

Note: there will be spoilers in this blog post if you're going to read "Flowers for Algernon".

I'll give you a brief overview: Flowers for Algernon is about a boy who is very eager to learn but has mental disabilities that impair him from even being able to form the simplest sentences. However, a surgeon came along who had an idea about performing some complicated neurosurgery that will get rid of these disabilities. They try the surgery on the narrator, and he indeed becomes smart -- one indication of that is that he reads "Paradife Loft" for fun (and yes I know a lot of you guys... let's just say didn't really like it). Eventually, he becomes so smart to the point that he passes the intelligence of the surgeons who did the surgery on him. Before his surgery, though, the surgeons tried the same thing with a lab rat named Algernon. The narrator finds that Algernon's mental ability to deteriorate over time, and he finds that the increase in intelligence from the surgery is directly proportional to the time elapsed: in other words, if the surgery makes you super smart, you will deteriorate in a short amount of time, and vice versa. Soon after, Algernon dies, and the narrator puts flowers on the grave. Hence the title.

Now, as the Narrator's intelligence starts to fade away, his language changes. In the beginning, his words are garbled, but after the surgery his sentences become increasingly complex... but then his sentences start to degrade near the end of the book. It is specifically this part of the book that Sander's "Jon" reminds me of: when Charlie's (the narrator of "Flowers for Algernon") language starts to fade, we see traces of him trying to use complex language, but ultimately failing. Similar to Jon's narration, we get the jist of what Charlie's trying to say, but it is obviously wrong, such as when he says "trumpet cart".

Another similarity to the two characters is that they both have had some kind of neurological modification - this seems self explanatory, but just to be clear (for those of you who forgot to read "Jon"), Charlie got a brain surgery and Jon got a metal shaft stuck into his neck that stored advertisements (I still don't understand why... I mean I guess its a utopia so I can't judge?). Again, what really stood out to me the most was the language, which is arguably the most fascinating part of both stories. The fact that both characters had some obscure memory of what these idioms are supposed to be like but can't totally execute them properly just makes me link together so strongly. And finally, both stories ended up pretty depressing for me, which I'm pretty used to by now considering all the books we've read this semester...

As for some overarching theme that many blog posts have... to be honest I really don't have any: this is just an observation that I made with a book I've read previously (and is arguably my favorite book). If you guys don't feel relatable to my feelings in this post... I understand -- after all, we are not required to read "Flowers for Algernon", though maybe it should be put into the 20th century Novel course *hint hint*.

6 comments:

  1. I don't know that I'd call the world depicted in "Jon" a "utopia"--more of a dystopia, with a special class of kids sequestered away to serve as permanent focus groups for marketing to teens, their brains modified to be literally structured by advertising and its messages exclusively. (Doesn't sound so utopian to me!) Jon's weird language does seem to be a reflection of the fact that such kids would need to be "dumb" to a significant extent--incapable of abstract thought, larger questions about freedom and individual identity beyond their ability to put into words. Reading Jon's narration, it's like there's an intelligence and sensitivity that keeps remaining just out of reach--he grasps for words and can barely say what he wants to say. But by all indications, this language serves him just fine when the task is writing up a report on some new product lines he's been asked to test. This peculiar "dumbness" is an asset in this world.

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  2. This was an interesting post! I've never read the book you were talking about, although I do remember a little bit of the book talk you gave last year. I feel like Jon can be smart but this world he lives in (as well as the chip in his brain) only let him get so far. It seems like he does try to express himself well but these ads garble his speech and take over what he's thinking. I found "Jon" a really interesting story.

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  3. Deja vu? Mr. Mitchell mentioned your blog post was similar, and now I'm getting deja vu reading it. For me, the narrative voice is a key part of enjoying any piece-- like having a good actor to go along with the script and set. I will definitely check out Flowers for Algernon on your recommendation.

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  4. I haven't read "Flowers of Algernon" but from what I gather from your post there is a pretty interesting dynamic of Charlie's deterioration of intelligence and language abilities. I found this section of "Jon" very intriguing, with his failure to correctly use certain colloquial phrases (trumpet card, etc). But one part that wasn't touched on as much that I found very interesting was that it seemed that whenever Jon tried to call up a certain emotion to relate it to an experience or conversation he was having, his brain gave him a commercial instead. Your post made me think of this as his own "degradation of intelligence," and it puts a new spin on the story.

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    1. Mr. Mitchell and I got to talking about some of the things that came up in the ads in "Jon." We discussed the ad for ButterSub whose point of departure was from Jesus's feeding of the five thousand (54). This partiular ad helps us to realize that nothing in this culture is sacred anymore, not even a miracle performed by Jesus in biblical times. This struck me as a deterioration of society as a whole (as to be expected in a dystopian setting), despite the fact that it's far more technologically advanced than our society is (with the neck implants and all).

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  5. The issue of language in "Jon" is definitely very interesting. The theory was thrown around that his language had deteriorated because he was retelling these stories from after he went outside, but the use of advertisements as a bridge to assist his communication of emotions makes it seem like he just hasn't had an education that provided him with the ability to speak without comparing his feelings to those represented in advertisements.

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